Somehow the Lady Harris knew that I was starting to edit the first draft of my current WIP today and decided to grace/terrify me with some advice for editing ones own writing. As usual, I’ve add my own little opinions and ideas because, hey, this is my blog and I’m mostly talking to myself here anyway.
1. However much self-editing you do, at some point you’re going to need a competent editor. But before that…
Yes. You can’t keep it forever and you can’t depended solely on self-editing if you want to be published.
2. Allow time – at least 3 months if you can – before editing your work. You need to be as objective as possible.
Wow. Three months? Um … well .. I’m going to say a minimum of one month because time passes for us working mums like dog years. A month is a long time. I can’t remember what I ate yesterday … ok that’s not true because it was cake and sausage rolls, but I can’t remember what I ate day two days ago let alone what I wrote a week ago. I’ve read my own writing from three years ago and it’s like someone else wrote it.
3. Read your work aloud as you go. It’s the most valuable editing tool there is.
This works for a lot of people, including me. I can also suggest having someone else read it to you if you’ve really gotten stuck or find a scene particularly sticky. Someone you trust.
4. Change the font when starting a final edit – you’ll be amazed at how much more detail you’ll notice.
Oh, go on, change the font, change the line spacing, change the layout. MSW0rd has a cool thing called “read mode” that makes it look like a little novel page/spacing wise that can help you spot over-long paragraphs fast.
5. Your dialogue will be improved immeasurably if you remove all or most of the adverbs
Yes. Also a fair few tags as well.
“You can’t be serious?”
“Well, that’s a bit radical.”
“Try it; you might like.”
Would you be confused as to who might be saying the above if you’re reading a scene with only two people? No? Me either. Keeps it punchy.
6. Editing is hard work. You only have so much attention-span. Don’t exhaust it by doing too much.
I don’t know what you’re tal…zzzzz.
7. Listen to your instincts. You know when something doesn’t feel right. And if you notice, so will your readers.
Yes. Do give it time though. This is where that waiting time comes in. If you finish a draft and immediately set to work again, a lot might not feel right because you’re not really able to see it properly.
8. Editing isn’t an afterthought. It’s an essential part of the process. And yes, EVERYONE needs it. Even you.
For the love of God, please listen to Joanne! And every agent ever. No one is so good they don’t need to edit. If you’re self-publishing, you don’t get to skip this either. Nor do you get to try to have it done as cheaply as possible. It will show. It will hurt your story.
9. Most books will need editing a number of times. That’s life. Live with it.
Anywhere from three to fifteen. I’ve heard of higher, but those were usually epics that just got completely away from the writer.
10. Identify your bad habits and the words or phrases you tend to overuse. Deal with them before someone else does.
Just. So. That. Saying the same thing twice. Repetition of descriptive words for bodily noises/functions like burble, gurgle, bubble. – these are just some of mine. What are yours?